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#1 luvsmyncis

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Posted 10 May 2013 - 06:45 PM

Love Poem for a Neocodex Member Contest



Starts: Now
Entries due: Sometime early on Friday May 17th.

Voting begins: Sometime after 'early' on Friday May 17th.
Voting ends: Sunday May 19th (after Game of Thrones)
Winners will be announced shortly thereafter.


~*~*~*~

How it works:

You write a poem, an ode, a series of haikus, a limerick, etc. dedicated to or inspired by a fellow Neocodex member.

You may enter up to 3 different poems, but only if they are each about separate members.

All poems should be PMed to punkrockbigmouth. Do not post your poems in this thread.

Throughout the week, the poems will be judged by staff members.

10 finalists poems will be chosen.

We will be looking for beauty, creativity, descriptive use of language, humor and wit, rhyme and meter, and just overall artistic quality. The finalist poems will be posted without the name of the author for an unbiased vote in a public poll.
 
When voting is over, the winners will be listed in order of popularity, and prizes will be chosen accordingly.
 
When all is said and done, all poems will be featured in a Blog entry for all to enjoy. 

Tips:
~You may not vote for your entry, even if you think yours is the best. Sorry.
~Pandering to staff does not guarantee our favor. But it never hurts to try, I guess.
~Proofread your poem before
submitting. We will not edit your work.


Prizes include:

** Pyro's Ponytail **

(that's correct. His ponytail)


** $10 NC card **


** $10 iTunes gift card **


** Custom Plushie **

(winner of plushie chooses character)


** Official Neocodex Shell **


** 1 Month Free Advanced Membership **

(this prize is available for Member or Advanced rank only *grumblefuckinDrakonidgrumble*)


~*~*~*~

Enjoy.

 
 



 

THE POEMS

 (Vote for the one you think is the best

Remember: YOU MAY NOT VOTE FOR A POEM YOU WROTE.)


~*~*~*~

1. 
An ode to People (in general), the color pink, the Jonas Brothers, Taylor Swift, vegetarians (in general), Doctor's Handwriting, smelly old people, prescription insurance companies, racists, and impatience

Oh humans who are a threat to the human race,
Rejoice and sing as there is a new case!
Pink is back in style as far as the Jonas Brothers are concerned,
So Taylor Swift can contemplate all her boyfriends she earned.

While smelly old people frolic in the grass,
Vegetarians stop to yell at dogs for being carnivores but alas:
Thus begins the long journey of forgiveness.
Forgiveness of having Doctor's handwriting in all seriousness.

As this ode trots to a close,
Prescription insurance companies start to propose.
Meanwhile the impatient racists are waiting in the sun
For punk to enthusiastically tell me I won.

~*~*~*~

2. 

-Oompa Loompas stroll in-


Oom-pa loom-pa doom-pa-dee-do.


I've got genuine feelings for you.


Oom-pa loom-pa doom-pa-dee-dee.


Stay away from that scheming aussie.


What would you give for a chance with Honey?


She's the embodiment of sexy.


Forgive me if this comes off as creepy.


I really want that custom plushie.


no not Pyro's ponytail


Oom-pa loom-pa doom-pa-di-da


I'd meet with her no matter how far.


You can live a lustful life too,


Like the oom-pa loom-pa doom-pa-dee-do!

~*~*~*~

3. 
Napiform

The true scope of beauty measured in stride.
An awkward woman whom has a very quirky upside.
While many dote in utter allure.
Despite herself she is quite sure.
Her one true passion her heart doth glide.

~*~*~*~

4. 
Dared by the ecstasy of your presence
Regarded most dear in my heart
Asinine posts are your call
Killing stupidity in a most insulting manner
Omnipotent in all that is good and right
Never in need of a reason
Intellect beyond comprehension
Do you feel the same way, I wonder

~*~*~*~

5. 
A Sweet Little Turnip

Turnip, Turnip, full of sweet fluff and glee
Cutest drawings pine for innocent hugs
Whose power can make a burly man squee
And purifies the hearts of blackened thugs

ERMERGERD, you are simply gosh darn cute,
Studio Ghibli’s premier braving dame
aboard Totoro’s Catbus friend en route
or aloft on Haku’s cerulean mane

Just wait until you meet her in TC
A huge difference that will make you twitch
Cards and collectibles obsessed, she be

Even sweet roots have such a taste most kitsch
This deceitful flower fools the sundry
As this little one is one crazy ass bitch.

~*~*~*~

6. 
'Jhudora'
photogenic on
camera always muted
watching big red lips

~*~*~*~

7. 
The Hair I Left Behind Me
It will never again
see its glory days perched
high upon a
beauteous scalp,
ever so long and swaying
without trestle, nail or screw.
No longer is it connected
effortlessly to a man
and a brain and a tub of guts.
My heart aches for its
effervescent, vivacious
bounce
that once defined Pyro699.
Life will go on, surely,
but the sloughed hair that
he carried with pride now lies
meaningless, awaiting a new
purpose

~*~*~*~

8. 
The Colonel

I once had a loving tear drinker,
an NDN friend and a thinker.
He's gone, out of sight,
departed with spite, for Sweeney was too cruel, that stinker.

~*~*~*~

9. 
'The Ballad of Cyo'

I see him online with the rest and

he's always so mean

I'm confused and dumb, when he speaks

Words: designed to demean.


Cyo, Cyo, Cyo... why isn't Estonia southwest of Mexico?


I can't do the science stuff;

you think all I do is whine.

I'm disgusted because

you are anything but benign.


Cyo, Cyo, Cyo you would look so good in Mexico


You hurt my feelings, but

I love guys that act like asses

Forgiveness sucks.

Land and sea, separated by masses


Cyo, Cyo, Cyo Why isn't Estonia southwest of Mexico?


Why do you have to be such a dick?

This is so lonely.

The things you say make me sick.

Glad you're far away, only...


Cyo, Cyo, Cyo, You would look so good in Mexico

Cyo, Cyo, Cyo, Why isn't Estonia southwest of Mexico?

Cyo, Cyo, Cyo, You would look so good in Mexico

~*~*~*~

10. 
I was walking down the street
Want to go see the priest
Too many churches, which to choose?
Fuck this, I'll just go take a snooze
Adam then shows up out of the blue
"Really Adam is it true?"
Slowly I asked, "are you a jew?"
In literally 2.5 seconds he said we were through
The hell, I said, What about my tattoo?
"Ass", he said, get a clue.

~*~*~*~
 

THE WINNERS

1st Place: Bone

2nd Place: Pilot and Napiform

3rd Place: Yung, Keil, and Futurama


The authors...
#1- written by James - 1 vote
#2- written by Pilot - 5 votes
#3- written by Yung - 2 votes
#4- written by aNEWvision - 1 vote
#5- written by Keil - 2 votes
#6- written by Napiform - 3 votes
#7- written by Bone - 1 vote
#8- written by Bone - 6 votes
#9- written by Napiform - 5 votes
#10- written by Futurama - 2 votes

~*~*~*~

Congrats to the winners. Thanks to all who entered and voted.

I will contact you each as it's your turn to pick a prize.

#2 Nonexistent

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Posted 10 May 2013 - 06:50 PM

erotic?



#3 Drakonid

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Posted 10 May 2013 - 06:53 PM

If I can't win the month of advanced then there's no point.

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Posted 10 May 2013 - 06:55 PM

Two Questions:

 

During voting,is the author's name kept anonymous?

 

In our poems, can we manifest our "love" as something really corrupt and twisted like genuine affection and respect?



#5 Boggart

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Posted 10 May 2013 - 07:02 PM

Oh my god I can win genuine mermaid hair?



I WISH I WERE CREATIVE



#6 luvsmyncis

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Posted 10 May 2013 - 07:06 PM

erotic?


Like Skarl and Hagan? Well, if that's the only way you know how to express your feelings, you can send it to me in PM, but I don't think you'll win.

If I can't win the month of advanced then there's no point.


Hahaha.

Two Questions:
 
During voting,is the author's name kept anonymous?
 
In our poems, can we manifest our "love" as something really corrupt and twisted like genuine affection and respect?


The answer to both your questions is 'yes'.

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Posted 10 May 2013 - 07:17 PM

Ok I'll try to write something good, but I suck at writing, and feeling

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Posted 10 May 2013 - 07:17 PM

I forgot to say this earlier: every since we got new mods, I appreciate how you all attempted to have new contests one in a while to get people talking. Great job NCS (Neocodex Staff)!

 

/pander pander pander panda pander pander



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Posted 10 May 2013 - 07:57 PM

I love judging people poems.
This is going to be awesomeeeee!

Hope we get lots of entrants  ^_^



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Posted 10 May 2013 - 08:05 PM

Oh my god I can win genuine mermaid hair?



I WISH I WERE CREATIVE

What if Pyro is a furry and a brony and the "pony tail" is a chain of ponies glued together to form a tail for a furry costume?



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Posted 10 May 2013 - 08:26 PM

What if Pyro is a furry and a brony and the "pony tail" is a chain of ponies glued together to form a tail for a furry costume?

Trust me, he ain't and it is a REAL ponytail from the admins head. *creepymuch*



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Posted 10 May 2013 - 08:26 PM

Roses are red

Violets are blue

Fuck all of this

And fuck all of you



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Posted 10 May 2013 - 08:30 PM

Roses are red
Violets are blue
Fuck all of this
And fuck all of you


Aw shucks :$

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Posted 10 May 2013 - 08:35 PM

Roses are red

Violets are blue

Fuck all of this

And fuck all of you

So heartfelt, thanks Frizzle ♥



#15 ceterisparibus

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Posted 10 May 2013 - 09:11 PM

Roses are red

Violets are blue

Fuck all of this

And fuck all of you

love is truly unpredictable 



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Posted 10 May 2013 - 09:20 PM

Rose are reds

Violets are blue

I love you adam

Let's fuck.



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Posted 11 May 2013 - 01:34 AM

Violets are purple.

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Posted 11 May 2013 - 01:44 AM

Violets are purple.

 

 Dats not how dis wurks. Let me hlp u.

 

 

 

 

Violets are purple,
I'd like to give you a nurple.
I once had a pet trout,
his dream was to become a LifeScout.

 



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Posted 11 May 2013 - 05:31 AM

Roses are red
Violets are blue
Fuck all of this
And fuck all of you


Frizzle's eyes are nothing like the sun
Coal is more like, black as his heart
If snow be white, he's whiter than snow
If hairs be wires, he's got a wiry butthole
I have seen roses mentioned, and violets too
But in his bitching I see nothing flowery
And in some farts is there more delight
Than the bullshit that from Frizzle leaks
I love to hear him speak, yet well I know
That the sound of a dying seal hath a far more pleasing sound
I grant I never saw such a jackass go on and on
Frizzle, when he talks, he says mean stuff
     And yet, by heaven, I think my love as true
     As any lie that is believed by few


... sorry I couldn't make it rhyme. :(



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Posted 11 May 2013 - 09:26 AM

Did not rhyme 2/10 would not fall in love again.



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Posted 11 May 2013 - 06:17 PM

Can we write about former members? What about the past identities of current members (e.g. iruleatants, Jaxxen)?

 

I WILL WIN THAT PONYTAIL.



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Posted 11 May 2013 - 07:35 PM

Can we write about former members? What about the past identities of current members (e.g. iruleatants, Jaxxen)?
 
I WILL WIN THAT PONYTAIL.

Pffft.
I'll win it and have it sent to some stranger's house.

#23 luvsmyncis

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Posted 11 May 2013 - 07:53 PM

Can we write about former members? What about the past identities of current members (e.g. iruleatants, Jaxxen)?


Sure why not.

Pffft.
I'll win it and have it sent to some stranger's house.


Oh you.

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Posted 12 May 2013 - 07:08 PM

Do we have to tell you who it's about?



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Posted 12 May 2013 - 07:25 PM

Do we have to tell you who it's about?


That would ruin the mystique, wouldn't it?



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