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[NapisaurusRex]

AND THE WINNER IS....

 

@DonValentino

with this masterpiece:

 

Entry #2

Our kingdom is between the sheets, 

immune to the arrows flung by 
infidelity and overdue rent.
Under the covers we are lovers, 
confined by our passion 
to extreme pleasure or depression.
Our lies will unravel soon, 
stretched thin as we stray further
each afternoon, only coming home to
dream about what could have been.

 

 

The other contestants:

#1 @cassiopeiic

Spoiler

Entry #1

In between where the pavements meet
The mascara runs as the rain strokes my face
As you touch the bullet holes in the wall and laugh
What a wonderful place it would be
Were it not that you are not there
And never were
And never will be
In between where the pavements meet

 

Please pm @Rauul for your prize, donval

Baby Paint Brush by @rauul


This award for the winner! 

 

[Katya]

Congrats to both. You did a real nice job.

[Cass]

Congrats For anyone curious about the meaning of my poem, it is as follows. If you don't want the mysterious vagueness that is the meaning to be ruined, don't open the spoiler.

 

Spoiler

It's about the moment I had my first kiss with a guy who was kinda 'the one that got away'. The bulletholes are pretty literal, since he was showing me a corner of a street with bullet holes where a maffia execution had taken place. It was a pretty morbid place to have romance and I feel it resembled our entire interaction with each other. Hence why he isn't, never was and never would be in that place; it was twisted and never meant to be.

[DonValentino]

Thank you for your votes And thank you @cassiopeiic for entering and not being lazy

[talbs]

Congrats to the entrants for actually participating and congrats to Woody on the win.

[Rauul]

Congrats Donvalentino and cassio ! 

 

Valentino, pm me for ur prize

[Cass]

@DonValentino you'll set up the next round, right?

[DonValentino]

@DonValentino you'll set up the next round, right?

ja, next week

[MKOunite]

Congrats! would like to try out one of these competitions eventually