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#1 Kate

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Posted 17 May 2016 - 05:03 AM

Helloooo everyone! 

I'm not sure how many of you like Haikus but they are so beautiful, simple, and easy to write.

3 Lines
5 Syllables
7 Syllables
5 Syllables


Anyone interested? :)



#2 talbs

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Posted 17 May 2016 - 06:08 AM

A haiku per week

The thought is a noble one

Let's do it Codex



#3 Kate

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Posted 17 May 2016 - 06:15 AM

A haiku per week

The thought is a noble one

Let's do it Codex

That is the spirit
We can do this together
Even just us two
 



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Posted 17 May 2016 - 07:54 AM

Haha good idea! I'm writing a haiku a day this summer, so this is cool.

#5 Karla

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Posted 17 May 2016 - 08:46 AM

A haiku a week?

That sounds like a good idea!

I want in on this.



#6 Padme

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Posted 17 May 2016 - 08:49 AM

To Haiku or not

That is the question at hand

The answer is yes

 

 

That is a really really bad Haiku but I'll try anyway.

I read a womans adventure is writing a haiku a day for a year and some were funny and some were very intuitive. 



#7 talbs

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Posted 17 May 2016 - 08:53 AM

Thanks to all of you

The threads an early success

Keep up the haikus



#8 Lucy

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Posted 17 May 2016 - 08:57 AM

The chocolate I ate

Is tickling my uvula

So many regrets

 

 

Inspired by the 3 bars of chocolate I ate today. Don't do this at home.



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Posted 17 May 2016 - 09:13 AM

my feet are cold and

I am also hungry

at least I'm alive still



#10 Karla

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Posted 17 May 2016 - 10:55 AM

my feet are cold and

I am also hungry

at least I'm alive still

 

I fixed that for you.

Anyways, I love this thread

and all it's Haikus.

 

:D



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Posted 17 May 2016 - 10:59 AM

Fuck, don't make me write
Most of the time, it just sucks
Lobster ravioli

#12 Katya

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Posted 17 May 2016 - 11:08 AM

I'm not sure how to
Syllable in English, crap
I wonder... It's good?

#13 Kate

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Posted 17 May 2016 - 11:13 AM

I'm not sure how toSyllable in English, crap
I wonder... It's good?


You did fantastic
I use the clapping method
Just clap on each sound

#14 Padme

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Posted 17 May 2016 - 11:15 AM

You did fantastic
I use the clapping method
Just clap on each sound

 

This is my method also 

Sometimes I say it out loud and cringe so hard at what I wrote



#15 talbs

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Posted 17 May 2016 - 11:21 AM

This is my method also 

Sometimes I say it out loud and cringe so hard at what I wrote

 

This is not haiku

Try again and resubmit

We will celebrate



#16 Keil

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Posted 17 May 2016 - 11:21 AM

You did fantastic
I use the clapping method
Just clap on each sound

 

HEY, YOU! STOP! RIGHT NOW!

"A" haiku per week means one!

Ban yourself right now.



#17 Padme

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Posted 17 May 2016 - 11:24 AM

Fuck, don't make me write
Most of the time, it just sucks
Lobster ravioli

 

 

HEY, YOU! STOP! RIGHT NOW!

"A" haiku per week means one!

Ban yourself right now.

 

was your lobster ravioli haiku you wanting to join? LOL 



#18 Lucy

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Posted 17 May 2016 - 01:16 PM

I wonder if we

Could communicate using

just shitty haikus

 

Most certainly not

Because who has time for that

Me, apparently



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Posted 17 May 2016 - 09:00 PM

Here are the ones I've written so far:

 

the pillow is cold

and stairs do not creak at night

but how would I know

 

drunk, i pressed my luck

feet dangling over the edge

lives changed in an instant

 

it was just a kiss

i was drunk, it meant nothing.

means something to me



#20 Junjie

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Posted 17 May 2016 - 09:03 PM

What is a "hai ku"
I like the sound of that tho
Lets sort of do this

#21 DonValentino

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Posted 17 May 2016 - 09:20 PM

What is a "hai ku"
I like the sound of that tho
Lets sort of do this

 

there is either do

or not do, no sort of do.

do as you will do.



#22 Lucy

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Posted 18 May 2016 - 01:12 PM

Here are the ones I've written so far:

 

the pillow is cold

and stairs do not creak at night

but how would I know

 

drunk, i pressed my luck

feet dangling over the edge

lives changed in an instant

 

it was just a kiss

i was drunk, it meant nothing.

means something to me

 

there is either do

or not do, no sort of do.

do as you will do.

You can't come in here

And actually start posting

Haikus that sound neat



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Posted 18 May 2016 - 02:49 PM

I can't haiku well
Even to save my life
But looks fun so I'll try


#24 Coops

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Posted 22 May 2016 - 04:43 PM

I want to feel that
soothing inner peace but I
don't know how to zen


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Posted 01 June 2016 - 06:39 PM

smooth, firm, rigid, hard

dripping wet satisfaction

my water bottle





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