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[WMGTea]

Check out my deviantart page for all the artworks that I've done the past several years. Working on a lot of illustrations and some cosplay stuff as well!

http://gunboundmasta.deviantart.com/

I'm also open to critiques and comments! Let me know what you think! Thanks!

[Junsu]

Your noses/barefeet are all weirdly positioned/shaded/drawn.
Lion's eyes are unsymmetrical.

I'll just comment on the soul eater one.
That arm/hand is REALLY awkward.
Is his shirt really that big? It looks like his hand is holding up the soul with the pinky finger/thumb because the thumb isnt correctly drawn.
The hair needs better shading for the spikes in the back/right

Everything else is pretty!~

Edited by Rapist, 24 September 2011 - 06:57 PM.

[Rooshy]

Your noses/barefeet are all weirdly positioned/shaded/drawn.
Lion's eyes are unsymmetrical.

I'll just comment on the soul eater one.
That arm/hand is REALLY awkward.
Is his shirt really that big? It looks like his hand is holding up the soul with the pinky finger/thumb because the thumb isnt correctly drawn.
The hair needs better shading for the spikes in the back/right

Everything else is pretty!~

Yay for constructive crit.

[WMGTea]

Your noses/barefeet are all weirdly positioned/shaded/drawn.
Lion's eyes are unsymmetrical.

I'll just comment on the soul eater one.
That arm/hand is REALLY awkward.
Is his shirt really that big? It looks like his hand is holding up the soul with the pinky finger/thumb because the thumb isnt correctly drawn.
The hair needs better shading for the spikes in the back/right

Everything else is pretty!~

Definitely agree with you for the most part. I really don't have a keen eye for proportions, etc.

Illustration isn't my forte, at the moment - still just trying to improve overall. If I was any good, I would've taken illustration in college, lol.

Thanks for the c&c