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[California]

rem'd.

Edited by California, 01 November 2011 - 11:49 PM.

[Waser Lave]

The first is a bit hard to read at first glance in my opinion. I prefer the second one out of those three options.

[California]

The first is a bit hard to read at first glance in my opinion. I prefer the second one out of those three options.

Yeah, I agree. The execution was really poor on that one. I got tunnel vision because I liked the last two so much.

[Waser Lave]

On the third one, I actually thought the O was a gun sight initially, perhaps that's just me though.

[California]

On the third one, I actually thought the O was a gun sight initially, perhaps that's just me though.

Wow. Nice eye. I might take that and use that for another company concept.

The idea was that the actual constructed singage (monument sign) would contain a clock, and the spoon would spin with the current time of day. But yeah, gonna need to edit that because I can't unsee the business end of a rifle.

[likerobots]

either second or third, the first is too feminine / immature.
can you try the third with a sans serif?

[lluvia]

I definitely like the second one the best.
The third looks too "stiff" and formal, and the first doesn't fit the theme as well as the others do.

[Junsu]

First is too plain,
Second is my favorite,
Third's letter O doesn't seem to match the rest of the letters.

[California]

I just got my critique from my Professor and he sees a butthole in the 3rd one. He likes all the sketches I hate.

[Waser Lave]

I just got my critique from my Professor and he sees a butthole in the 3rd one. He likes all the sketches I hate.

Perhaps it's like an inkblot test and what you see reflects on your psychology. The fact that he sees a butthole worries me.

[California]

Perhaps it's like an inkblot test and what you see reflects on your psychology. The fact that he sees a butthole worries me.

He said the spoon looks like the female gender symbol ♀ which I guess I can see. He totally hates all of them.

[California]

omg XD
he is looking into this way too much

That's part of the profession. The idea is to get as many opinions as possible and narrow it down, simply because not every one will see the same things. But by knowing that he sees a butt I can edit what I have so that won't come across anymore. Just has a lot to do with reworking things and using different angles.

Haha, that's why I am open to all forms of criticism. My teachers are really, really harsh. Gotta be prepared for the worst!

[Joanna]

I personally like the third one. It looks professional and has a lot of class. Its perfect.

[Maloo]

That's part of the profession. The idea is to get as many opinions as possible and narrow it down, simply because not every one will see the same things. But by knowing that he sees a butt I can edit what I have so that won't come across anymore. Just has a lot to do with reworking things and using different angles.

Haha, that's why I am open to all forms of criticism. My teachers are really, really harsh. Gotta be prepared for the worst!

I saw the same as he did in the second one..that character reminds me of something kinda..religious, I don't know
If it weren't for that, it'd be my favorite..But right now I'd go for #3

[pkdust]

I think the third one is my favorite, i really don't know why.

[Rachel4]

1st is boring and plain. Also it does not fit into the theme at all.
2nd is quite childish but and fits the theme the best. It is not as professional and classy as 3 .
3rd is classy and professional but it doesn't fit in the theme as well as number 2 plus it is quite boring.
At a glance i thought the O looks like a key hole or something.
You should change that O .

[Musician]

1) I really like the fancy font, but it doesn't fit your theme at all.
2) I agree with your professor in that the t with the spoon looks like a female gender symbol, but the entire logo is very pretty and cute.
3) I'd go with this one, mainly because the font gives it the "old-time" feel and it's the most professional-looking out of the set.