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[Eggy]

Im writing a love note to this girl in my school... And I would just love it if u guys could help me out with it... Well here it is so far:

I always mean to talk to you, but I am often too intimidated by your beauty, but when I do, I savor every moment. And before you ask, no, im not some freak. Im in your school, and am in your science and english classes. My expiriences are always made better when you are there, your smile always lights the room. I have had a crush on you since 6th grade, so for 3 years I have kept quiet, so now I am reaching out to you. You are the funniest, most beautiful and smartest girl I have ever met in my life, and I would love to get to know you more.

[Tim]

Will your name be on it? That would make it a lot better

Anyways. Reading it, something sounds weird to me, but I can't pick it out -_- I'll get back to you when I can find the problem.

Edited by Shorty., 19 December 2005 - 04:16 PM.

[Waser Lave]

Personally I would say that this should be something personal to you, just say what you feel, you shouldnt need other people's thoughts on the matter since they know neither you nor the girl...

[Brad]

WHO TALKS LIKE THAT!

ok, sometimes I do, but it might be too poetic. makes it seem like your more trying to be romantic than expressing your true feelings

[Tim]

Yeah, I would just go with what you think If she likes it, then you're good, and if she doesn't, I guess she just isn't for you (But you could get to know her more, then maybe she will like you more if she gets to know you better )

Edited by Shorty., 19 December 2005 - 04:20 PM.

[Eggy]

What other feelings could I express? Besides I like you, I liked you for a long time etc.

[SupermanFTM]

Exactly, I have the same problems sometimes xD Put more emotion into it, but don't try so hard. Tell her how you feel and yeah, name yourself Good luck Eggy!

[Eggy]

Hmmm. How about this:

I always mean to talk to you, but I am often too intimidated by your beauty, but when I do, I savor every moment. And before you ask, no, im not some freak. Im in your school, and am in some of your classes. I think about you every day and cant get you out of my head, and to be honest, I like always thinking about you. People always sing songs and write poems about the perfect girl and stuff, but I never believed in any of that, but when I met you, that all changed. If this is what they call love, them hell, im in love with you.

or is that coming on too strong?

[Raui]

possibly comming on abit too storng there eggy

[Ender]

Hmmm. How about this:

I always mean to talk to you, but I am often too intimidated by your beauty, but when I do, I savor every moment. And before you ask, no, im not some freak. Im in your school, and am in some of your classes. I think about you every day and cant get you out of my head, and to be honest, I like always thinking about you. People always sing songs and write poems about the perfect girl and stuff, but I never believed in any of that, but when I met you, that all changed. If this is what they call love, them hell, im in love with you.

or is that coming on too strong?

Too strong.

[Eggy]

Too strong.

any suggestions? :blink:

[Krnsaber]

Hmmm. How about this:

I always mean to talk to you, but I am often too intimidated by your beauty, but when I do, I savor every moment. And before you ask, no, im not some freak. Im in your school, and am in some of your classes. I think about you every day and cant get you out of my head, and to be honest, I like always thinking about you. People always sing songs and write poems about the perfect girl and stuff, but I never believed in any of that, but when I met you, that all changed. If this is what they call love, them hell, im in love with you.

or is that coming on too strong?

I'd say thats even stronger..

[Eggy]

I'd say thats even stronger..

People are saying use more emotion... so I am

[Waser Lave]

People are saying use more emotion... so I am

How can you know you love her if you havent even dated her yet?

When you get to know her more, you might find out that you don't like her as much as you think you do...

[Eggy]

How can you know you love her if you havent even dated her yet?

When you get to know her more, you might find out that you don't like her as much as you think you do...

thats... so...helpful...?

[Waser Lave]

thats... so...helpful...?

All I'm saying is that you shouldnt start talking that strong until you know how you really feel about her...and if you start by sending her a note saying that then you might just scare her off and you really don't want that.

Instead of sending a note, why dont you just ask her out to her face?

[Archon]

I think your letter in general is a bit cheesy. (Sorry! ) If it were up to me, I'd just call her up and talk about it.

[Eggy]

But I cant! Im spineless x.x

[hoju]

Well first off... you got a spelling mistake
'I always meant'
And another thing.. you shouldn't tell people you've liked them for a long time..
they might think your a stalker o.o
Just walk up to the girl and ask her out or ask to be friends and build up from there

[Will]

Ok how about this...you give me her number and I'll ask her out for ya?

[Eggy]

Ok how about this...you give me her number and I'll ask her out for ya?

:blink:

[Will]

I was just kidding Eggster.

[Eggy]

Some real help would... help...

[Ives]

Don't make such silly love notes and just come up to her and be straight foward. Just simply tell her 'Hey, do you want to go out?' and on your first date, explain alot more.

[Eggy]

Don't make such silly love notes and just come up to her and be straight foward. Just simply tell her 'Hey, do you want to go out?' and on your first date, explain alot more.

But its intimidating to go straight up to someone... I dont work that way =/