My Horrible Romance
Started by Thrasher, Oct 30 2006 04:27 AM
9 replies to this topic
#1
Posted 30 October 2006 - 04:27 AM
#2
Posted 30 October 2006 - 05:35 AM
ooh I like the text - the head on the right is pretty freaky.. The only thing i would fix here would be the backgtound... it is rather plain
It gave me shivers to look at it as the head almost looks chopped off lol
It gave me shivers to look at it as the head almost looks chopped off lol
#3
Posted 30 October 2006 - 09:26 AM
Big empty space in the middle, sparkle/spatter brushes look poor and theres a white blob on the left that looks ugly.
Also, it looks kinda flat, not much tonal variation.
Keep practising
Also, it looks kinda flat, not much tonal variation.
Keep practising
#4
Posted 30 October 2006 - 10:23 AM
Hey Frank. It's a good style. Frank's better at large pieces.
PS. He's at graphic arts school.
PS. He's at graphic arts school.
#5
Posted 30 October 2006 - 11:07 AM
I know Frank.
Just because he's at arts school doesn't make him good
Just because he's at arts school doesn't make him good
#6
Posted 30 October 2006 - 01:51 PM
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I know Frank.
Just because he's at arts school doesn't make him good
Just because he's at arts school doesn't make him good
Not???
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Hey Frank. It's a good style. Frank's better at large pieces.
PS. He's at graphic arts school.
PS. He's at graphic arts school.
How the bark do you know?? XD well thanks for the nice comment and hey back
and i've updated it cause i agreed that the bg was kinda boring and it didn't had enough depth (not that it made it that much better but still,..)
Anybody got some hints to give it mroe depth?

#7
Posted 30 October 2006 - 02:00 PM
It's a cool signature. I think you should add a little colour to the left side though, either that or remove the blurred dude because he's a wee bit distracting from the focal point.
#8
Posted 30 October 2006 - 02:04 PM
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It's a cool signature. I think you should add a little colour to the left side though, either that or remove the blurred dude because he's a wee bit distracting from the focal point.
i am thinking about making the blurred dude less dark and add some more spikes over him especially by his coat
#9
Posted 30 October 2006 - 02:48 PM
i like the sig alot its plain and simple right to the point
#10
Posted 30 October 2006 - 02:54 PM
i am thinking about making the blurred dude less dark and add some more spikes over him especially by his coat
I like the idea of that you might want to experiment with putting some shadows in behind the spikes ...play around with the filters in the backdrop.. I like this version much better then the last
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