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[ChrisTW]

I was rather bored and just finished watching Ironman so I figured I'd do an Ironman siggie...never done one before.

2 versions, one with realistic coloring one without:





C&C please.

(Bonus points if you spot the second Ironman render, it's blurred a shitload...unless you have a keen eye you'll probably miss it)

EDIT: ^^ actually disregard that unless you know where it is it's like impossible to see xD...

Edited by ChrisTW, 30 December 2008 - 04:11 AM.

[Jenna]

hrm this is a little messy c4d wise, erace a bit of the face and body so it stands out a little more.

the shiney ness is good. the text needs a bit of work and I am not feeling any flow.

[Cyo]

you need to clean up face and balance left side because on right there is some shit and on left there is not

[ChrisTW]

Kay I'll work on the flow; I know text isn't great. Cyo: there's more of the render on the left but it's darkened a lot, I tried lightening it but it doesn't look good....I could move the render over but I made the render as wide as the sig so his hand will be sort of cut off. I'll see how it looks though.

[sonic]

Try using a c4d with less of the same flow.
Plus, the render is not as strong of a vocal point as you would like.

[Skooljester]

found the second one =D
clean up the face. There is far to much in front of it and it greatly distracts from the render. Also the render blends in too much, it should pop a bit more