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Puppetmaster

Day two is up! http://puppektion.newgrounds.com/news/post/576260

Mar 20 2011 01:20 AM

Trichomes
Just a bit of advice - be consistent with your verb tenses. You suddenly switch to present tense in the second paragraph and it sounds awkward.
Mar 20 2011 05:40 AM
Puppetmaster
I do find myself doing that from time to time... My one weakness :-\
Mar 20 2011 11:12 AM

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