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Waser Lave

He's giving him suggestions on how to improve it...
Dec 17 2013 02:44 PM

Pyro699

He asked me to tell him what i thought, and i did.
Dec 17 2013 03:34 PM

GhostMommy

Not everyone has to take a background check, you can go to a gun show and skirt the whole thing. You also use first person a bunch, for a presentation you shouldn't say "I think", you are trying to be more sure, so just say things like "It may be a struggle but" Also, your opening screen is really really busy, Senses on overload.
Dec 17 2013 03:46 PM