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[Storm]

I was bored tonight and wanted to try something new but I ended up with this. Not my best but its really si'mple and I think its pretty cool. rate


EDIT: just relised it's missing something I'mportant, but I don't know what. Any ideas? I know fox will 

[SteWieH]

it is pretty good honstly. could use work but not to bad

[Dazz]

how about a picture is what you'r missing?  anyway it is good

[Fox]

Hmm... I'm not sure what it's missing as such... perhaps there should be a point of interest on the left somewhere. If you don't want to add a character, perhaps some abstract swirly brushes or something? Possibly in a dark colour too, like medium-opacity black.

You've pulled off the acidity very well, it doesn't look too garish and I really quite like the bright opacity bar. I'm not sure I like the way the two different 'honeycomb' textures meet in the middle, I'm not sure how to tidy that up though... perhaps have it so that the rocky honeycome texture goes all the way to the left, then using the soft eraser on maybe 50% opacity, get rid of the bit to the side.