I'm sorry, but that is so grossly incorrect, I just had to jump in.
What you wrote there was utter bollocks. Evolution is a biological change in a population.
It does not, in any way, necessitate the spontaneous generation of a new species.
As far as the "first" particle is concerned...
First of all, you get a phospholipid bilayer forming in a puddle. This happens naturally, due to physics. No higher power intervention required.
This can happen spontaneously billions of times a second, when you consider the probable size of a primordial ocean.
Eventually, one happened to form and become stable. Not so unlikely as you may be keen to point out.
Now, due to the nature of this type of membrane, certain things can get in, and certain things cannot.
This fundamental property has not changed for however many millions of years cells have been around.
Due to this property, however, conditions are created inside the cell for other molecules to form.
Thus, you produce archaebacteria, very simple cells.
And it all escalates from there. Theoretically.