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[Aloé]

for an artpack^


http://aloeverao.dev...Garden-81455831

My first manip^

[Sweeney]

I love the central circle on the second one. I don't know if it's on purpose, but the planet, bannister and windmill blades make a circular impression in the middle.

It's excellent

[Selphie]

Oh my goodness... I don't even know what to say! -jaw drops-

[Grizzly]

They're both beautiful.

I'm not a fan of manips, but you did yours very cleanly. I still think some of the elements are kind of awkward, like the statue for instance; however, I suppose this is inevitable for a collage/manip. Props though, you've created a very magical and imaginative world with some ordinary images. Like the thought behind it. Reminiscent of The Secret Garden/Pan's Labyrinth to me, with the little girl and the garden and all ^^.

The first is my fav. I love the little world you've created on a hand. It's kind of a twist on the iconic image of the "world on the palm of your hand". The style is cute and innovative. The blurred duplication of the hand bothers me though. It takes away from the cartoony style which really distracts me. And because it's blurred, the colors don't contrast from the paper.. they just kind of blend into dull and unsaturated colors.

[Hlaw]

i love the top one. that is very sexy. what artpack is it for?

[Aloé]

Im not really allowed to show it yet lmao.. anyway its for Luminarium, a beginning artpack site..

Thanks for the comments, and I do agree on the hand, more people complained about it .. Ill prolly delete it..

[Jackus]

I love the central circle on the second one. I don't know if it's on purpose, but the planet, bannister and windmill blades make a circular impression in the middle.

It's excellent

I see it also,
Very cleverly done!

[sarah.]

Love the first one Vera, I think it's easily one of your best pieces so far. The second is good too.

[Jenna]

i like them both actually very creative, I hope you offer the pack to us when your done

[princesseh]

Yes they're both really good
I especially like the top one
Just all the colours in the fingers hehe
colours are always good

[kuwaz]

The arm is nice but I suggest some anatomy adjustments. Women have biceps too lol, its a little too caved down, perhaps straight from elbow to shoulder would be better. The higher bit of the upper elbow, the part that bends needs a bit of shrinking, it looks really odd. Also she doesn't have knuckles, not sure if thats intentional or just the illusion from the pink.

Also, the bottom line of the lower arm should be a bit cleaner/straighter since all your other lines are nice and clean. Some other lines also needs a bit of work, perhaps the pen tool and vectors would be your good friend. Try it (the tracing) in illustrator since photoshop can only do vector to a certain point and requires too many layers.

[.myaim45]

both are total sex.