6 replies to this topic

[Vitalis]

Still experimenting with different stuff. Comments are always welcome.

Edit: Funny how I always end up hating my signatures an hour or two later.

Edited by Vitalis, 19 August 2008 - 03:54 AM.

[Eeyore]

I really like what you've done around her, but I think there's just a bit too much empty space really, I can see the effect you're trying to go for but personally I'd take a chunk off the right side, leave some of the space though obviously. Also not so keen onlike the blurry bit at the bottom right of her that extends into the empty space, the wigglyness above it is quite nice but I dunno, the other bit just looks slightly off to me.

But hey, what do I know . Good work .

[Vitalis]

Unfortunately, I applied the image so many times that I can't go back and unblur the blur without messing something up. Although I did follow your suggestion and sliced off a bit of the signature:



I think it looks a lot better. Thanks for the critique.

Edited by Vitalis, 19 August 2008 - 03:55 AM.

[vattu-]

I really like this, well the first one, the one with more empty space.
The colors are really nice and the motion works well with the render,
and the emptyness in the first one was something that I liked, it kinda
gave room for "thoughts" for the pic.

Dont know if I'm making any sense, but thats what I saw when I looked at it

[Nick]

The face is too obscured.

[Just Another User]

hmm Eeyore was right there was too much space to the right... maybe you could add some text there or something? Other than that i think you've done a pretty good job

[Eeyore]

The face is too obscured.

In fairness that seems to be the render itself that's obscuring her face, her hand and hair .