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[Ayami]

I have no name for the project yet just a scheme

[Noitidart]

Wow thats an evil looking site!
Looks really cool though!

[Ayami]

Changing navigation to be on the top I personally think it looks better up there but am unsure, and Thanks Noit! (Note Must ZOOM in on the image or the blood effect will not look like it really should this goes for both previews)

Preview #2

Edited by Ayami, 30 August 2009 - 02:54 AM.

[Cyo]

Change the font it is gay

[Chew]

I would say maybe fine tune your descriptions of your people. The way it is now sounds very amature and to be just does not flow to well. I like the colors and the font might be a little basic so a little tweak there too. What kind of site is this going to be? Just a general forum or geared towards a certain area?

[Noitidart]

Put more space between the top nav and the content bg.

[Ayami]

Change the font it is gay

I welcome feedback but not stupidity how about an explanation instead of being an ass ?

The description sitting on 'news' is only placement text, I don't want to use lorem ipsum, The site is suppose to be basic, I could do something neat and fancy but i like simplicity more, as far as the project goes there isn't much information to provide yet we are mostly still debating everything, I put the preview up for i was talking to shadowlink about it.

Edited by Ayami, 30 August 2009 - 02:31 PM.

[Noitidart]

Tons of people use "lorem ipsum" what the hell does that mean? I've been seeing it for 8 years! Since I first started coding dhtml!

[jcrdude]

http://www.lipsum.com/

From the wiki

In publishing and graphic design, lorem ipsum is the name given to commonly used placeholder text (filler text) to demonstrate the graphic elements of a document or visual presentation, such as font, typography, and layout. The lorem ipsum text, which is typically a nonsensical list of semi-Latin words, is a hacked version of a Latin text by Cicero, with words/letters omitted and others inserted, but not proper Latin

"lorem ipsum" has no translation.

"dolorem ipsum" roughly translates to "pain/grief itself"

Edited by jcrboy, 30 August 2009 - 02:49 PM.

[Cyo]

I welcome feedback but not stupidity how about an explanation instead of being an ass ?

The description sitting on 'news' is only placement text, I don't want to use lorem ipsum, The site is suppose to be basic, I could do something neat and fancy but i like simplicity more, as far as the project goes there isn't much information to provide yet we are mostly still debating everything, I put the preview up for i was talking to shadowlink about it.

I gave you an explanation.
the font is gay, and being gay is bad (being bi leaves you with much more choices), the font is bad so I suggested changing it.

If you don't like constructive criticism then fuck off and get back to the kitchen.

[shabba]

Now now Cyo..

Ayami a few things..

I wouldn't have the nav sitting on top of the main text area, it looks like it's not meant to be sitting there if you know what i mean..

Also the type in the content is awful, it needs to be bigger and more ledgable, maybe Helvetica, or a serif font.

[Ayami]

I gave you an explanation.
the font is gay, and being gay is bad (being bi leaves you with much more choices), the font is bad so I suggested changing it.

If you don't like constructive criticism then fuck off and get back to the kitchen.

They say you can't fix stupid, They were right.
''gb2kitchen lollololol look at me i brose ur e-nets no female!''

[Dreww]

I gave you an explanation.
the font is gay, and being gay is bad (being bi leaves you with much more choices), the font is bad so I suggested changing it.

If you don't like constructive criticism then fuck off and get back to the kitchen.

The font is an eyesore, but you don't have to be such a dick about it.

If you're going to use a sans-serif, Use one with more uniformity between the letters. Those Ws feel incredibly out of place for me.

[Ayami]

I have been gone a while thread from 09, Just thought he deserved a comment back because what he said was pathetic.

But thanks dreww for proper crit!

[jcrdude]

I have been gone a while thread from 09, Just thought he deserved a comment back because what he said was pathetic.

But thanks dreww for proper crit!

Yay! Ayami's return brings many Kirbys!

[Fresca]

So... did you ever end up changing the font?