Make your paper off the wall somehow. If you have to just stretch the truth to make it more interesting and different. Also after you have written it take it to your highschool counselor or a writing center at the university or community college. They normally will critique you and give you advice as to what you need to do in order to make it more acceptable.
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In Topic: College Admission Essays
26 August 2008 - 01:35 PM
In Topic: Teen drops out of high school to play guitar hero
18 August 2008 - 08:15 PM
I never understood why so many people put so much dedication into that game. He should have picked up a real guitar and geared that time towards that.
In Topic: Hi everyone
13 August 2008 - 01:24 PM
Welcome, and I think I may have mugged you once
In Topic: Does anyone make display pics?
09 August 2008 - 05:43 PM
QUOTE (Army_Strong @ Aug 9 2008, 06:19 PM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
HA HA I was thinkin of subtracting some zeroes like .000000000000000000005 how that sound
But that is damn good for an off hand though
In Topic: Does anyone make display pics?
09 August 2008 - 04:46 PM
QUOTE (whats_good @ Aug 9 2008, 04:41 PM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
i'd pay 5 mill for that
I was thinking more along the lines of adding a few more zeros to that figure. 5million does not do justice for my artistic skills.
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