I lovelovelove the texture. I thought more work could've been done to the fire to actually make it look like it's burning the paper/background/whatever since right now it looks a little like little flames floating atop the letters.
Also also, I felt that the bright orange quotation marks made a really good contrast to the paler words in the quote :3
I have nooo idea what your synopsis meant, although, judging by the way you described it, I'd probably be confused throughout half of the movie because of the constant change in chronological order. Still, it sounds interesting. I like movie titles that don't really mean anything at all until you actually watch the movie <: