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[thaythay]

Hello everybody! I've just gotten into digital drawing.

What do you think of this? Just looking for some advice on how to improve. If you have any tips, please share Thank you!

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[Keil]

Amazing start! What program do you use?

 

I think a more subtler shading would be better. The rim of the head is too charcoal-y for my taste. Also the eyes seems to be more fatigue-resulting "Raccoon eyes" than the natural eye contours of the aisha. However, I can instantly say that you drew an aisha unlike other peoples' first try. You're on your way

[thaythay]

I use an app on my iPad And thank you very much! Yes, the eyes started bugging me once I uploaded it, but I got lazy towards the ends and didn't want to get it perfect, I guess xD  Good to know I'm off to a good start!

[heytheredj]

I think it's very cute.

And since I can't draw worth crap its pretty damn amazing.

Haha.

 

Looks lovely (:

[thaythay]

Thanks!

[Drakonid]

The head is too round.

[Amie]

It's great for something you've drawn on an iPad However, I'd need to see your hand-drawn art to properly critique! ;.;

[NapisaurusRex]

I think a more subtler shading would be better.

However, I like the 'charcoalyness' of the head. You also seem to have some disconnect in the neck where the collar is. It is a very cute aisha though!

[thaythay]

I honestly think my hand-drawn art is not as good, really. Anyway, here's something else I drew.

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[Amie]

I honestly think my hand-drawn art is not as good, really. Anyway, here's something else I drew.

 

Well, if you're adamant about it, I'll do a redline on this one if you want. Though there's not much to crit on a face, and yours are pretty good already (:

[Drakonid]

I honestly think my hand-drawn art is not as good, really. Anyway, here's something else I drew.

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